12. Cinematography video feedback and learner response

1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

WWW: 
very creative narrative
excellent location
excellent music + sound effects 
Narrative element
Excellent editing 
Excellent typography 
Starts with long shot
Shot reverse shot 
Use of POV
Lowkey lighting 

EBI:
Make all clips the same aspect ratio 
Match on action 


2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.
WWW:
creative 
good sound - parallel 
shots + movement 
background sounds 
credits 
Location
Action 
lighting 
actors expressions 

EBI:
too dark (not my fault just the screen in classroom)
needs to be one minute 

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.
I believe that my narrative was quite good/creative and I managed to cover all the shots however i believe i could’ve improved my aspect ratio and possibly my quality.

4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice? 


I’ve learned that i need to do my match on action properly and i need to revise that and i also need to make sure u film all my shots the same way in my practical. I should also add more edits. I also learnt from others that i can recreate a movie show and make it into my own rather than creating a whole new original concept which could make my work easier.

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